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Post by Shadingsun on Apr 23, 2011 12:28:31 GMT -8
Rosepaw felt panic flash through her, and she just stared at the rouge with sad eyes, almost unaware of Nightpaws stare. She then looked at Nightpaw, then looked back at the rouge and unsheathed her claws, keeping silent and inching towards the rouge until she was a whisker-length behind him. She froze for a second, looked down at her paws, then pounced on the rouge, dragging her hind-claws down his hind-quarters. The rouge screeched then tryed to shake her off, ignoring the entrance of the cave. Gritting her teeth, she kept her claws stuck in the heather-colored rouge. "Go!" she snapped to Nightpaw, who was seen peering out from the entrance with shock eched in his face. Now she could see all the rouges clearly. There was the black and white tom, who was standing guard with shock flashing in his face. There was also the cat they had heard earlier, who was a tom with a gray pelt and a white muzzle. The tom had a metal-ish brace around his mouth, and long scars across his pelt, and he looked like a thin and mean kittypet.
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Glorycall ran after Duskstar, his nose twitching from the two apprentices fear-scent. "This way!" he said, skidding to a stop and then veering to the left.
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Post by Duskstar on Apr 23, 2011 16:28:43 GMT -8
"No Rosepaw, Im helping you" meowed Nightpaw. He jumped on one of the rouges and started clawing him on the face. The rouge shook him off and Nightpaw landed hard on the ground. He got up and jumped on the rouge again despritly trying to scratch the rouge so many times. ****************************** Duskstar and the rest of the group ran faster and faster following Glorycall. They were at the waterfall where Nightpaw and Rosepaw was. Duskstar looks at the two apprentices as they were trying to keep themselves alive and fighting the rouges. "No one messes with DuskClan" growled Duskstar. She then signalled her warriors and apprentice to the rouges and to fight them. Checkerspaw started running towards the rouge that Rosepaw was fighting he got the rouge of of Rospeaws back. The rouge tumbled but quickly got back up and started heading to the two apprentices.
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Post by Shadingsun on Apr 23, 2011 17:15:04 GMT -8
Rosepaw nodded thanks to Checkerspaw, but was quickly cut off as she dodged a nip from the metal brace cat. The metal brace cat grinned, and Rosepaw was aware that they were on the edge of the waterfall. Not wanting to get pushed over, she quickly ducked under the metal braced rouge and knocked his legs out from underneath him, quickly slipping out of the way before he landed on her. The tom growled and seeing for an opening from the ground, he sprang up with all his might and bit Rosepaw in the neck. Rosepaw coughed, the world around her darkening, and the tom threw her off the cliff in relished anger, and then Rosepaws world went black, and she could hear no more than a desperate screech.
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Post by Duskstar on Apr 23, 2011 17:27:08 GMT -8
Nightpaw was finishing off the one rouge with help of Duskstar. Duskstar finna;y killed the one rouge. Then Nightpaw looks over the cliff and dosent see Rosepaw. "ROSEPAW" screeched Nightpaw. He dident hear an ansewer. He looked behind him and sw the rouge that killed Rosepaw. "You killed my only hope! Now you will pay" grumbled Nightpaw. "What are you going to do to me you tiny mouse brain" asked the rouge. Checkerspaw looks at Nightpaw and was ready to run. Duskstar stopped him quickly. "This is his battle Checkerspaw, Iceheart trained him well and I want to see whart hes got" meowed Duskstar. Nightpaw hissed and groweled. "YOU CANT KILL MY ONLY HOPE" shouted Nightpaw. He sceamed and attacked the rouge so much. He threw him around tripped him, and threatened him. Then the rouge pinned Nightpaw down by the throat near the cliff. "You dont want to end up like that friend of your dont you" asked the rouge. Nightpaw chocking stared at the rouge. Then Nightpaw grabbed the rouges throat and started scratching it. the rouge backed away and Nightpaw got up. He then sinks his teeth on the rouges throat and the rouges legs starts wobbling. The rouge fell to the ground and dident breath. Nightpaw was happy about his victory but wished that Rosepaw dident die. Nightpaw layed on the ground and started crying. Duskstar walks up to Nightpaw and sat next to him. "Its ok Nightpaw, lets get back to camp" meowed Duskstar. Nightpaw got up and ran back to camp. The cats finally reached to camp and Duskstar looks down wandering what she was going to say.
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Post by Duskstar on Apr 24, 2011 8:01:50 GMT -8
(apperently Checkerspaw stayed begind still at the waterfall) Checkerspaw was still near the water fall and looked at the water fall. He then heard a loud grumbling coming from the bottom of water fall. Could that be Rosepaw. He found a trail that leads to the bottom of the water fall. He ran down the trail as fast as he can. 5 minutes past and he finally reaches the bottom. "Rosepaw you ok" asked Checkerspaw. He looked at her as she was coughing. "I cant believe your still alive! Ill bring you back to camp" meowed Checkerspaw. He put rosepaw on his back like he did with Crystalpaw and brought her back up to the cliff. He was at the top and he took a short beak. She he put her back on his back and kept walking. He passed to two dead bodys and then disappeared into the forest heading back to camp.
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Post by Shadingsun on Apr 24, 2011 8:47:54 GMT -8
Rosepaw coughed, blood coming out in small drops from her mouth. Her insides felt like mush, and all four of her limbs throbbed with agony, but she knew what counted most was that she was still alive.....but just barely. She could barely feel all the scratchs on her body from the hard waterfall rocks, and her eyesight was "flickering" back and forth. First she could see the forest, but then she could only see a snow white field, and she knew she had to get to Smokesong soon.
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Post by Duskstar on Apr 24, 2011 9:00:31 GMT -8
"Dont worry Rosepaw, we are almost there" meowed Checkerspaw softly. He was still walking and started to get tired of carrying Rospeaw but he knew that he had to get Rosepaw back to camp and to Smokesong. He kept on walking and pretty soon he saw the entrence to the camp. He then started to run alittle but walked again. He reached camp and walked directly to the Medcine cat den without saying a word to anybody. *********************************************************** Nightpaw looked up and spotted Checkerspaw with Rosepaw on his back. Nightpaw was still tired and scratched up from the battle but he sat there on the Medcine den waiting for Smokesong to put something on his scratches. He still sat there. "Checkerspaw, is Rosepaw still alive" asked Nightpaw. "Yea but she dosent look to good and needs alot done" meowed Checkerspaw. Nightpaw put his head down hopeing that Rosepaw would stay alive. Nightpaw was sore, bitten, cut, and scratched many times. He sat there and waited. ***************************************************** Duskstar looked up and saw in the Medcine den that Checkerspaw and Rosepaw was there. Duskstar ran up to Checkerspaw. "Is rosepaw still alive" Duskstar asked as she was whispering in Checkerspaw ear. "Yess" meowed Checkerspaw. Duskstar grinned and left. She stopped and nowknew that Rosepaw wasnt dead. "Well im happy" meowed Duskstar. "Guess I wont have to do a sad memorial" she whispered.
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Post by Shadingsun on Apr 24, 2011 12:10:57 GMT -8
Rosepaw gritted her teeth and shut her eyes tight, not able to bear the dizzy world around her. She groaned as Smokesong set her on the ground lightly, and she opened one gray-blue eye to find the medicene cat busily making a polituce. Not able to gain enough strength to speak, she struggled with this and eventualey sighed and slowly covered her eyes with her paws. After three minutes of this, she uncovered her eyes, opened them, and tried to speak. "D-dont g-g-give me any poppy seeds or calming stuff; that would only make it easier for me t-to...." Rosepaw trailed away as she could feel herself losing grip, and she struggled to hang on to her life, her eyes going wide.
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Glorycall watched with wide eyes from the entrance to the medicene den at Rosepaw and Crystalpaw, his thoughts clouded as he tried to decide which one he should worry about more. When he saw Rosepaw suddenly gasp for air and struggle to breathe though, he decided that she was in a whole lot of trouble, and if Smokesong didnt cure Rosepaw of her bleeding and struggle for air, she would surely die in the next five minutes. There was a shout and a shove from behind him, and he looked back to see Iceheart, Spiderflame, and Shadowtail, who were crowding around the medicene den behind him, be shoved away to only be replaced by Burntpaw and his sneering father, Shadowscar, who was also Rosepaws father. He felt his eyes darken when he saw that Shadowscar was sneering at the dying Rosepaw, while Burntpaw looked on with a hesitant frown. Glorycall just growled and turned away from them, looking back at the two hurt apprentices.
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Post by Duskstar on Apr 24, 2011 12:52:33 GMT -8
Crystalpaw woke up from the poppy seeds wearing off. She looks at everyone crowded at the Medicine den. She gets up and looks at the contraption on her leg. She then exits out of the den and sees Checkerspaw at the crowd. She poked Checkerspaw lightly. Checkerspaw turns around and sees his mate. "What did I miss" asked Crystalpaw. "Well, we battled two scouregs and then Rosepaw fell of a cliff and we are healing her" explained Checkerspaw. "Oh that seeems bad" meowed Crystalpaw. "well yea of course" meowed Checkerspaw. Crystalpaw peered inside to see Rosepaw not looking well and Nightpaw next to Rosepaw praying to StarClan.
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Post by breezeclaw on Apr 24, 2011 16:59:22 GMT -8
smokesong rubbed rosepaws lungs. "come on..." she growled at herself. she quickly grabbed some cob webs and wrapped them around her wounds. she heared burntpaw and his father whispering to each other. 'i cant belive this whimp..." she listened to burntpaw whisper. smokesong growled. 'thats it...' she turned around to face them. "what is wrong with you two! you, you dont even care that your own daughter is dying! and you burntpaw, you have some problems if you try to kill your own sister! all you do is disaprove of her and she did noting! she is just as good as you!" she snapped. the two cats eyes wided in shock. smokesong quickly turned around to heal rosepaw.
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Post by Shadingsun on Apr 25, 2011 14:12:58 GMT -8
(Has actualey just cried from a song and might act a little dramatic right now xD)
"T-Thanks." wheezed Rosepaw, her eyes still wide.
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Burntpaw gazed at Smokesong, his eyes wide. Is that really how he felt? He had only done those things because Shadowscar had told him too......,he thought, looking up at Shadowscar. Why does he hate Rosepaw so much? "Come on." hissed Shadowscar, his head still raised up high as he padded away from the crowd and into the warriors den. Burntpaw looked at his paws, his eyes stinging, gave one last fleeting glance at Rosepaw, then followed his father, running to catch up to him.
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Post by breezeclaw on Apr 25, 2011 15:29:57 GMT -8
smokesong pressed cobwebs into rosepaws pelt. "dont mention it..." she mumbled sadly. "no one should treat a family member like that..." she sighed. she stopped her work. "you must rest now. would you like soe poppy seeds?" she asked gently.
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Post by Shadingsun on Apr 25, 2011 16:52:06 GMT -8
Rosepaw shook her head. "I dont want any right now; no matter how much you stare i cant feel any of my scratchs right now. Although i`ll probaly feel them later." she murmered, feeling like she had just spoken a big speech and flipping over and burying her muzzle into her paws. Her lungs ached with pain as she breathed, but she tried to sound as soundless as she could while trying to go to sleep.
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Post by breezeclaw on Apr 26, 2011 13:19:47 GMT -8
smokesong nodded and walked off to the other side of her den to rest. 'i hope tomorrow is better...' he thought then layed down and closed her eyes.
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Post by Duskstar on Apr 26, 2011 15:37:14 GMT -8
Duskstar saw Smokesong and Rosepaw. "Nightpaw, I think Rosepaw might want some sleep while healing up" meowed Duskstar. Nightpaw looked at Duskstar with some tears in his eyes. He nodded and went with Duskstar out of the den. Nightpaw went to the apprentice den suddenly without saying a word. Duskstar wondered about Nightpaw then kept on going. ***************************************** Crystalpaw felt rested and sat next to Checkerspaw in the middle of the camp. "I feel pretty bad for Nightpaw and Rosepaw..... Its my fault" meowed Checkerspaw. "Hows it your fault" asked Crystalpaw. "If I wasnt distracting Rosepaw, She wouldnt be like this" meowed Checkerspaw. "What did you do to think you distract her" asked Crystalpaw. "I went in to help her and right when she was going to say thanks, The rouge threw her over the cliff" meowed Checkerspaw. "Then it was an accident" meowed Crystalpaw. "Well" whispered Checkerspaw. "Well lets just hope that Rosepaw and Nightpaw will be ok" meowed Crystalpaw. "Yea thats basically ALL we can do now" meowed Checkerspaw. Then the two started shareing tongues.
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