Stream of the waterfall

breezeclaw
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Stream of the waterfall Dec 26, 2010 11:58:09 GMT -8

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Post by breezeclaw on Dec 26, 2010 11:58:09 GMT -8

Name: Stream Clan:Cats of the Waterfall Rank:leader/dream walker Gender: male

Looks: darkish grey pelt. with dark blue eyes. idk has no claws on one paw o-o

Personality: nice. and generous. ummm likes eating birds

History- became leader. after leader ritual he was murdered. uhhh nearly drownded when he was a kit

Relatives or mates: everything unknown

Notes: rwar

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Last Edit: Dec 28, 2010 12:30:42 GMT -8 by breezeclaw

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Rainstar Administrator ~%7C:\Stormclan Leader/:%7C~ Yo no hablo espanol. Oh wait, I just did. Posts: 5,000,200	Stream of the waterfall Dec 26, 2010 14:35:46 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rainstar on Dec 26, 2010 14:35:46 GMT -8 You need longer sentences history needs to be longer and stuff not just one sentence
	Oh yus, my siggy is osom =p ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "If the sun burnt out, we wouldn't know for 8 minutes. So make life worth it and do something!" My characters: Rainstar, Embertail, Appleheart, Ravenpaw, ummmm Syre(Wolf) i think there're more...... Salem....RIP my fat little buddy, I'll always miss you

breezeclaw Moderator hello friends Posts: 910	Stream of the waterfall Dec 27, 2010 11:06:35 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by breezeclaw on Dec 27, 2010 11:06:35 GMT -8 there
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Stream of the waterfall Dec 27, 2010 12:15:14 GMT -8

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Post by Shadingsun on Dec 27, 2010 12:15:14 GMT -8

um........uh.....xD The looks needs to be more descriptive, and it has to be four sentences long. Its pretty much the same thing for your history and personality; be more descriptive and make your personality, looks, and history four sentences long please! Rainstar and I cannot accept it until you doooo~

Rainstar Administrator ~%7C:\Stormclan Leader/:%7C~ Yo no hablo espanol. Oh wait, I just did. Posts: 5,000,200	Stream of the waterfall Dec 27, 2010 15:12:24 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Rainstar on Dec 27, 2010 15:12:24 GMT -8 Geez shade! it doesn't really matter with the descriptiveness! But yea make stuff longer...augh where did that template go?
	Oh yus, my siggy is osom =p ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ "If the sun burnt out, we wouldn't know for 8 minutes. So make life worth it and do something!" My characters: Rainstar, Embertail, Appleheart, Ravenpaw, ummmm Syre(Wolf) i think there're more...... Salem....RIP my fat little buddy, I'll always miss you

breezeclaw Moderator hello friends Posts: 910	Stream of the waterfall Dec 28, 2010 12:30:54 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by breezeclaw on Dec 28, 2010 12:30:54 GMT -8 rwar there
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Shadingsun Administrator ◊leader of lunarclan◊ :~Escape-R E A L I T Y~: Posts: 22,159	Stream of the waterfall Dec 28, 2010 12:53:56 GMT -8 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Shadingsun on Dec 28, 2010 12:53:56 GMT -8 LOL, FINE ACCEPTED xD

Post by breezeclaw on Dec 26, 2010 11:58:09 GMT -8

Post by Rainstar on Dec 26, 2010 14:35:46 GMT -8

Post by breezeclaw on Dec 27, 2010 11:06:35 GMT -8

Post by Shadingsun on Dec 27, 2010 12:15:14 GMT -8

Post by Rainstar on Dec 27, 2010 15:12:24 GMT -8

Post by breezeclaw on Dec 28, 2010 12:30:54 GMT -8

Post by Shadingsun on Dec 28, 2010 12:53:56 GMT -8