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Post by breezeclaw on May 10, 2011 13:28:00 GMT -8
smokesong hurried out of camp. "go! run to water!" she yelled after all the cats. all the frightened cats were screeching and running every where, some almost stampeding over kits. smokesong shuffed a cat out of the way from stepping on mistykit. "watch where your going!" she hissed after the cat ran away egnoring her advice. the medicine cat picked up mistykit by her scruff., noticing that her mother must habe already gone. she was about to join the other cats when she heared a large cracking sound. she slowly turned around to see a burning tree falling into camp. "run!" she screeched loudly. the rest of the cats fled the camp quickly as the fire swallowed up camp. she hoped no one had gotten stuck inside.
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Post by Shadingsun on May 10, 2011 13:29:03 GMT -8
Rosepaw dragged her gaze away from the trees and looked at Nightpaw. "No; Everythings A-Ok." she said, smiling, lying not only to Nightpaw but hoping that this was true to herself. She then looked around, her gaze confused. "Wheres Burntpaw?!" --------------------------------------------------------------------
Glorycall looked at Duskstar quizzically, his head tipped to the side. "Well, why are you looking at me then? Arent you the leader?" he said, grinning with a hint of amusement in his voice.
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Burntpaw yowled from within the camp, now trapped between the filtering smoke and the burning tree. He had been the last to go, behind Smokesong, and he had been carrying the last kit, Thornkit, when the flaming tree had fallen. Now, both of the cats where trapped with nowhere to go, and his only hope was that someone would remember that somebody was missing.
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Post by breezeclaw on May 11, 2011 12:58:34 GMT -8
smokesong dashed ahead of the cats to reach duskstar. "we have to go get help from another clan! its our only hope." she pleaded.
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Post by Duskstar on May 15, 2011 12:26:45 GMT -8
Duskstar looked at StarClan. "One cat wants me to find a safe den from the fire, another wants me to go to a different clan at night" thought Duskstar to StarClan. She then looks back and a distance sees an empty but yet big den out of no where. Bondedsilence also spots it before Duskstar. "We can hide there" meowed Bondedsilence. "Thats what I thought" nodded Duskstar. "Hey everyone, me and Bondedsilence sees a den we can all be safe in! Follow me" screeched Duskstar. Then she sees a tree in flames fall behind the Clan almost hitting the cats in the back. "We dont have all da Duskstar! Lets get to the den" screeched Bondedsilence. Duskstar led the clan to the den and made sure every cat made it to the den. Crystalpaw with Checkerspaw came up to Duskstar with worried looks in their faces. "What is it" asked Duskstar. "Wheres Burntpaw" asked Checkerspaw?
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Post by Shadingsun on May 15, 2011 15:22:15 GMT -8
Rosepaw looked on worriedly at Duskstar, her ears flattened down in anxiety. She had managed to scramble off of Nightpaw, one injured paw off the ground. She looked behind her when she heard a rustle, and out of the bushes came the odd she-cat she had seen earlier. She half wondered why nobody else had seen her, but Rosepaw shook her head and shoved that fact out of her mind. Maybe this cat was a starclan cat. The cat stopped besides her and studied Rosepaw through narrowed eyes. From upclose, Rosepaw could see that the she-cat was glowing faintly, and was slightly transperant. Her eyes were a pitch black color, her pupils bright red, and she had a purple colar that glowed with her, a dull thorn stabbed throughout its texture. The she-cat would have been absolutley stunning, if it werent for the gruesome scars that traced her figure, and the fact that this cat was so slender that her ribs could easily be seen outside her outline. "Dont worry; our brother will pay for his crimes against us soon." rasped the she-cat, grinning and then sweeping away like a wisp in the wind. Stunned, Rosepaw blinked wide eyes and then turned back to Duskstar, waiting for her readily response.
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Post by breezeclaw on May 15, 2011 17:43:46 GMT -8
smokesong sat mistkit next to her mother. she ran up to rosepaw. "if anyone starts to look for me, tell them im saving burntpaw." she rasped through the smoke. she then ran off before rosepaw could reply. "burntpaw! where are you!" she yowled through the smoke. fire was burning all around her. it made her so upset to see her home be distroyed. she began coughing. "burntpaw! thornkit!" she screeched. she searched inside dens but they were not there. she began looking around franticly, thinking about the two young cats burning to death. 'i cant let them die!'
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Post by Duskstar on May 18, 2011 12:43:24 GMT -8
Duskstar looks at Rosepaw. "You dont look so great Rosepaw" meowed Duskstar. "You alright? Is something bothering you" asked Duskstar. Nightpaw looked at Duskstar. "I am going to help Smokesong" growled Nightpaw. Before Duskstar could open her mouth to speak, Nightpaw dashed to Smokesongs direction. "Nightpaw" screeched Checkerspaw. "He will be fine" calmed Crystalpaw. "I cant risk to lose our buddy" trembled Checkerspaw. "HE WILL B FIN FOR THE SECOND TIME" grumbled Crystalpaw. Bondedsilence went toward them to calm them. "You are safe here, dont worry about Nightpaw! He will be fine and I know it" meowed Bondedsilence. They all looked at each other and sat down.
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Post by Shadingsun on May 18, 2011 13:28:14 GMT -8
Rosepaw closed her eyes tightly, panic surfacing in her mind. Now Nightpaw was putting his life at risk? What was he thinking?! opening her eyes, she found that the weird she-cat was next to her again, and they both nodded an awknowlegement to eachother and took another way to camp; a shortcut, if you will. Whipping through the blackened trees, she turned around, pounding her paws down hard onto the sand, making expert speed and soon making it back to camp. She could see everything from up on the ledge, and spotting them near the medicene den, she narrowed her eyes. The transperent she-cat caught up with her and hissed, her black eyes glistening with anger. Shocked, Rosepaw backed up, but not before the she-cat could touch noses with her. Once they made contact, Rosepaw instantly slunk to the ground, unconsious, and the she-cat became solid instead of see-through. "Its my turn now, dear." said the she-cat, snickering and baring her long teeth in a shadowy grin.
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Post by Duskstar on May 18, 2011 15:24:41 GMT -8
Nightpaw was surronded with flames. He was coughing from smoke. His eyes were burning. He dident spot Smokesong anywhere. He then sees a figure.... Laying there by the Medicine den. "Burntpaw" Nightpaw wondered? He started to run around the flames and spots Rosepaw laying there. "Rosepaw!" screeched Nightpaw. He ran up to Rosepaw. "Are you ok" asked Nightpaw. A tree that was in deep was fire, litteraly drownched in flames. It fell behind them leaving a circle of flames around them. "Come on Rosepaw! Wake up" whined Nightpaw. He then pricks his ears up to feel they werent alone.
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Post by Shadingsun on May 18, 2011 16:32:43 GMT -8
The she-cat snickered. I bet he`s going to be shocked by how much I look like her, she thought, thinking of how clueless other warriors and apprentices looked when they saw her. Taking a deep breathe, the she-cat padded right through the flames, not a all burned by the scorches, not flinching at all, and crouched down, looking through the scorching yellow-orange sparks at Nightpaw. She then grinned wider and cackled, slinking around through the heat. Trying to scare him, she slithered around behind him in the flames and reached out one paw, prodding him in the shoulder with one pale ginger paw. Nightpaw`s hair stood on end, and he turned around. Although, once he saw her face, his eyes grew wide, and he took a step back, crouching next to Rosepaw. "Ello, pucket. Its finally nice to meet you." she snarled, stepping forwards out of the flames with an oddly menacing purr.
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Post by breezeclaw on May 20, 2011 15:29:53 GMT -8
smokesong began to cough heavily. "burntpaw!" she rasped.'i cant help feeling...' she thought then fell to the ground. 'i guess this is the end...' she thought sadly. suddenly, she heared a whoosh. she open her eyes and looked up. there was a ball of smoke around her, whispering like wind. she could now breathe and her legs felt stronger. she stood up slowly. "burntpaw!"
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Post by Duskstar on May 20, 2011 16:03:36 GMT -8
Nightpaw looked terrified. He backed away. "Who are you" growled Nightpaw. He examined her closely to see that she almost looked exactly like Rosepaw. He hears the roaring flames behind him as he knew he cant stay long and had to help Smokesong. He went near Rosepaw and sat next to her as he was still looking up at the she-cat. *************************************************** Duskstar looked out of the den seeing the burning DuskClan camp thinking about how long its go1ing to take to rebuild camp. "StarClan!? Dis DuskClan do something wrong for this to happen? What is going on" thought Duskstar in her mind. She knew that all that matters now that the cats in her clan are fine. Crystalpaw went up to Duskstar with worryed look. "What now Crystalpaw! Please not it being about Nightpaw because im pretty suer it is" growled Duskstar. "Um its not actully, leader, but I was wondering if DuskClan camp will come back to normal when the fire is done and we fix it" wondered Crystalpaw. "Thats what im wondering" murmered Duskstar. Bondedsilence called Crystalpaw over and thought of training her if she wanted to be warrior.
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Post by Shadingsun on May 22, 2011 14:09:14 GMT -8
Burntpaw gasped as he heard his name and yowled back to the familiar voice, which so far as he could hear, was somewhere around him."Smokesong?!" he wheezed. Thornkit yowled, his yowl cut off as he coughed, and Burntpaw hugged the small kit closer to him on the ground so that the creamy tom could breathe better.
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The strange she-cat growled and took a step closer, unsheathing her claws as she did so. "You will know me well, soon enough." she hissed, smiling. The was a yowl from behind, and the orange she-cat flinched and turned around quickly, staring into the flames with a curoius look flashing across her face. Blinking, she padded into the wall of flames, literally parting the fire like she was sweeping open a wall of curtains. She peered to into the heated hole to see Burntpaw, whose spotted pelt was blackened with smoke, and his eyes glistening with pain as he struggled to keep himself and the tiny kit besides him alive. The she-cat frowned and took a pace forward, but before she could do anything, her body convulsed in a sharp pain, and she hissed from shock and whipped around, looking at the body of Rosepaw. The apprentice was digging her claws into the ground, and the she-cat could feel the dredful agony from her as she fought to be brought back. Rosepaws screams were her own as she gasped and ducked her head down, swooning; "LET GO!"
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Glorycall flinched as he stared at the warriors of starclan up in the sky. What had happened, and why? It seemed to be an answer that nobody knew, not even Duskstar of all people, and he wondered what twisted mind would want this diaster to happen to the innocent clan. But this thought only made him wonder even more; where they really innocent?
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Post by breezeclaw on May 22, 2011 14:29:04 GMT -8
smokesong gasped when she heared burntpaws voice. "burntpaw!" she yowled. she jumped onto the ashed tree to the other side to find burntpaw and thornkit. she ran over to them, not noticing the unfamiliar cat. "come on! we have to get out of here!"
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Post by Duskstar on May 29, 2011 9:57:01 GMT -8
Nightpaw saw Rosepaw and the she-cat. They almost so simaler that he couldnt even tell which is Rosepaw. "What is goin on" he mumbled?? ************************************************************ Checkerspaw watch Bondedsilence teach her. They were at an empty corner in the den so it was a perfect place for them to train at without hurting anybody close by. Checkerspaw was sitting down watching them. He exaimened carefully and see if he could learn something but he knew he knew most hunting and survivle tips.
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