Post by breezeclaw on Aug 19, 2011 14:38:14 GMT -8
*WARNING: MAJOR SPOILERS. IN ORDER IN MAKE SURE YOU SONT UNDERSTAND IT (lol) I WILL NOT TELL YOU WHY HE DECIEDED TO DO THIS...JUNK SO GUESS AND KEEP TO YOURSELF. IF YOU DO NOT LIKE DEM SPOILDERS, DONT READ THEN YOU MELON.
Fishstream glared angrily. "of course you dont understand!" he growled. Tigermist snorted. "your fur's on fire, you must of lost your wits..." she mocked. Fishstream ignored her metafore. he acted as if he was going to speak again then flung in the other direction and stomped into the forest. "why dont they ever understand! why does Dustriver get so much attention from them? he is such a...pewny wimp!" he exclaimed. a patrol walked past them. "where are you-" redwhisker tried to ask him but he kept walking at a fast pace. "not even breezeclaw pays attention to me! and shes a medicine cat! its like she's so sad or busy all the time..." he hissed. "and i doubt redwhisker knows who i am the way she mopes around like she just saw a cat die!" he added. "they will pay!" he screeched.
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Fishstream watched his clan live around him. 'you all will pay...im coming for you.' he curled his lip at the sight of tigermist talking with orangebriar. he sat quietly as the clan began sharing tounges. "all you snobs better out run faster than my claws!" he screeched. the clan starred at him, shocked and yowled in horror as he tackled tigermist, sending orangebrair rolling away. he slashed at her face and clawed her ears. the clan did not even try to help her, they were too scared and horrified. the camp was loud with screeches and screams. queens were hiding with their kits, and the elders just watched, motionless. tigermist was screaming underneath him, unable to move because he was too heavy and was moving too fast. "help! help me!" she tried to yell. orangebriar knocked him over and pinned him down, but he had the obvious look of grief on his face. he slowly raised his paw but skinny fishswim threw him off and he hit a boulder, knocking him out. unsure wether he ws dead or alive, he charged at dustriver. cats fled from camp, some tried to help tigermist and orangebriar. dustriver was stronger and faught back by gabbing fishwims shoulders and pulling him down, causing the cats to roll away from each other, a move he had taught himself. emedatly after landing, fishswim had spotted tigermist and grabed her by the scruff. tigermist's paws flailed in mid air as she was thrown onto the ground. fishwim raked her expossed belly and throut then lunged down and tried to bite her neck but stopped when he heard paw steps running toward him. he attacked the nearest cat to him wich was redwhisker. quickspider ans sunflower watched nearby and screeched. redwhisker qucikly dodged the attack and fishswim rammed into rosepetal. instand of attacking he looked at her for a momment. she tried to wack him but he whipped around and attcked starpelt but starpelt was the strongest cat he knew and grabbed fishswim and pinned him down...
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fishswim ran into duskclan territory. he knew of a waterfall there. he shredded the grass as he used his claws to run as fast as he could. a patrol saw him and chased him. fishswim kept running, almost out of breath when he noticed the waterfall cliff. "he has to stop now!" a duskclan cat called behind him. visons flashed through his mind moving faster and faster as he moved faster. a ringing noise got louder as the images got faster. there was a sharp pain in his neck and face, everything went white. then black.
Fishstream glared angrily. "of course you dont understand!" he growled. Tigermist snorted. "your fur's on fire, you must of lost your wits..." she mocked. Fishstream ignored her metafore. he acted as if he was going to speak again then flung in the other direction and stomped into the forest. "why dont they ever understand! why does Dustriver get so much attention from them? he is such a...pewny wimp!" he exclaimed. a patrol walked past them. "where are you-" redwhisker tried to ask him but he kept walking at a fast pace. "not even breezeclaw pays attention to me! and shes a medicine cat! its like she's so sad or busy all the time..." he hissed. "and i doubt redwhisker knows who i am the way she mopes around like she just saw a cat die!" he added. "they will pay!" he screeched.
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Fishstream watched his clan live around him. 'you all will pay...im coming for you.' he curled his lip at the sight of tigermist talking with orangebriar. he sat quietly as the clan began sharing tounges. "all you snobs better out run faster than my claws!" he screeched. the clan starred at him, shocked and yowled in horror as he tackled tigermist, sending orangebrair rolling away. he slashed at her face and clawed her ears. the clan did not even try to help her, they were too scared and horrified. the camp was loud with screeches and screams. queens were hiding with their kits, and the elders just watched, motionless. tigermist was screaming underneath him, unable to move because he was too heavy and was moving too fast. "help! help me!" she tried to yell. orangebriar knocked him over and pinned him down, but he had the obvious look of grief on his face. he slowly raised his paw but skinny fishswim threw him off and he hit a boulder, knocking him out. unsure wether he ws dead or alive, he charged at dustriver. cats fled from camp, some tried to help tigermist and orangebriar. dustriver was stronger and faught back by gabbing fishwims shoulders and pulling him down, causing the cats to roll away from each other, a move he had taught himself. emedatly after landing, fishswim had spotted tigermist and grabed her by the scruff. tigermist's paws flailed in mid air as she was thrown onto the ground. fishwim raked her expossed belly and throut then lunged down and tried to bite her neck but stopped when he heard paw steps running toward him. he attacked the nearest cat to him wich was redwhisker. quickspider ans sunflower watched nearby and screeched. redwhisker qucikly dodged the attack and fishswim rammed into rosepetal. instand of attacking he looked at her for a momment. she tried to wack him but he whipped around and attcked starpelt but starpelt was the strongest cat he knew and grabbed fishswim and pinned him down...
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fishswim ran into duskclan territory. he knew of a waterfall there. he shredded the grass as he used his claws to run as fast as he could. a patrol saw him and chased him. fishswim kept running, almost out of breath when he noticed the waterfall cliff. "he has to stop now!" a duskclan cat called behind him. visons flashed through his mind moving faster and faster as he moved faster. a ringing noise got louder as the images got faster. there was a sharp pain in his neck and face, everything went white. then black.
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