Post by rainpath on Jan 11, 2013 19:11:34 GMT -8
This is my warriors fan fiction which I am also animating on youtube. Here's the first part of the prologue:
Here's the whole prologue:
“This is it, Rose. Where are your kits?” Rose squinted, trying to stay strong and not break down in front of these cats. “I won’t tell you! You’ll have to kill me before you lay a single paw on them!” She spat, her hackles raised defensively. She wouldn’t let them have her kits; she knew what would happen if she did. The male cat who seemed to be souly in charge of the other two, smiled sickly. It made her stomach churn. “Well, I think that could be arranged,” He stated malevolently, turning to the two toms behind him, “What do you think Shadow? Leaf?” they snickered in reply, wriggling their shoulders in preparation for giving a butal beating. She snarled at them; sparrow always seemed to forget she was from the same place as him; she could fight just as well. They all attacked at once; shadow was raking his claws down her side and leaf dove under her belly and batted at her with his claws. She grabbed Shadow by the neck and rolled over, crushing him beneath her. He clawed at her muzzle, but before she could reattack, she noticed leaf slinking away into her den; her hiding place for her kits. She lunged forward to stop him, but sparrow grabbed her throat tightly in his jaws and threw her harshly to the ground, like a rag doll. She opened her eyes slowly, reeling with nasea, and coughed up what appeared to be a liter of blood. She then noticed her underside had been ripped open and her neck seemed to be leaking the warm, tangy liquid. She took deep rasping breaths and gazed up in despair, realizing they had found her kittens and were pushing them out of the safety of the den in the most inhumane way. She watched as the kits mewled in protest and confusion. “What’s going on?” her golden colored she-kit asked, fearfully gazing up at the three massive cats standing before her. Sparrow gazed down at them in disgust. “I honestly thought you could do better than this, Rose. You always were my favorite.” His insensitive comment drove her to a sudden rage. She lunged for sparrow with a furious yowl, but he turned and caught her, slamming her to the ground, holding her down by the neck using his sharpened claws. Calmly shifting his attention back to her three kits, He growled, “Look at your pathetic mother. She ran away from something she knew very well would happen at some point, yet she still fights on,” He gazed at her for a moment, a sort of nostalgia flickering in his fiery amber eyes before turning his hardened stare to the kits, “It has been an ancient ritual in our group for the kits of a family to fight to the death with their siblings to see which is worthy enough to survive. It’s your time. You two,” He said gazing at her she-kit and dark brown tom, “You go first.” They hesitated, not understanding at all what was going on or what the consequences would be. Sparrow growled, clenching harder on her neck, “fight now, or watch your mother die!” They started to whimper as they saw the dark blood welling at her throat. Two of her kits immediately started to play fight, trying hard not to hurt each other. “Claws unsheathed!” Leaf shrieked, cuffing them hard over the head, “You’re trying to kill each other!” the two moon old kits stopped and whined from being hit which, in turn, earned them another strike. “Go on! On your feet, fight!” Her kits gazed at each other for a moment, looking like trapped mice. Her tom glanced around at all of the cats around him, with no sense of right or wrong. Suddenly he lunged for his sister and fastened his undeveloped teeth around her neck. She shrieked in pain and fear as Rose struggled to get out from under her attacker's hold. “Don’t hurt her,” she barely managed to choke out, “value your sisters’ lives more than mine.” “Silence!” Sparrow roared, swiping her throat. Her tom let go of his sister, who appeared to be more miniscule and fragile then a snowflake. “Mama!” He screeched, his voice cracking. He was so young; they all were. Too small even to eat meat. Sparrow’s laws were unjust. Suddenly, her she-kit shifted her dying eyes to her brother, filled with knowledge and wisdom, as if she’d grown old while her brother almost killed her. “I know what we have to do,” She whispered in a squeaky voice. He stared into her unseen depths and seemed to some how understand what she was suggesting. Rose caught on too. “No!” She croaked, shifting her paws, “It doesn’t have to be like this!” but she knew that was a cold lie, and they knew it too. It was the only way for them to be together, and the only way to show them they wouldn’t give into their cowardly ways. After unspoken goodbyes, the golden kit clawed her brother’s throat open, spilling his blood like a flooding river. In return, as he died, he bent down and snapped his sister’s neck. He fell over her, staining both of their fluffy, innocent kit fur scarlet. Rose couldn’t stand it anymore, she didn’t care if they saw; she burst into tears. When she lifted her head, she noticed her last kit, a fluffy white female, staring wide eyed in horror at her dead littermates and sobbing mother. “Mama,” she cried, shaking, “What’s going on? Why aren’t Honey and Claw getting back up?” Her voice cracked in disdain and disbelief. Rose stared at her last kit in anguish, too little too understand death, and why it must happen. “Hang on Waterfall,” Rose croaked out, feebly attempting to sound strong so she wouldn’t frighten her, “I’m coming.” But sparrow pressed down harder on her, and she assumed he was ripping her throat out. “You’re not going anywhere,” He breathed menacingly in her ear, smelling of crow food and many other cats’ blood, “You’re siblings were weak,” He spat at her young daughter, “You might be able to survive, but I'm afraid there is no one else for you to fight. You'll just have to go up against us.” Rose wanted to cry out, to make him realize how ruthless and horrible he sounded, but she couldn’t manage a single sound now, let alone a word. She watched helplessly as the two toms attacked her daughter, ripping open her little fore head and tearing out her fur. It had only been moments later when Shadow and leaf stepped back to reveal a bloody clump of matted white fur that seemed completely unrecognizable now. Rose turned away, feeling any diminutive urge to live ebb away at that moment. Sparrow bent down, his amber gaze wild with rage and madness. “All of your offspring were feeble!” He murmured maliciously in her ear, “and so are you.” He finished her off in the most humane way possible for him, by ripping out what was left of her throat. Sparrow lifted his head to his companions, his mouth dripping with her blood. “Let’s get out of here, we’re done.” Shadow and leaf nodded obediently, and followed their leader away. Long after the sound of their paw steps had faded, waterfall did something sparrow never counted on. She sat up weakly, and puked up her last meal and a ton of blood. She could barely feel an inch of her body, and she felt so nauseas she thought she’d pass out, but she had lived. After her fuzzy vision cleared, she searched around anxiously, spotting her mother after a moment. Whimpering, she limped over feebly to her, collapsing on her once beautiful golden pelt that was now blood stained. “Mama,” She squeaked out, tasting blood form in her mouth, “Mama I’m ok, see?” She stared at her unseeing eyes with growing despair. She shook her roughly, “Mama, get up!” She wailed, tears flowing down her face, “get up.”
Waterstar awoke trembling, rasping deep heavy breaths. She looked around sharply but found no sign of danger or any cat in her dream for that matter. She stared down at her nest, noticing the deep claw marks she scourged into it and the bracken and fern that were now strewn across her den. After she could breathe again, and close her eyes without seeing horrifying images, she stood and walked hastily out. She padded onto the branch that hung above her den, and sat, trying to take deep breaths of the cool, crisp, night air. She didn’t know what was going on with her. She had the same nightmare every single night now, and some days she should have spent leading her clan, were instead spent sleeping to satisfy her tiredness. She didn’t feel tired now. She looked out over the camp, still shaken from her dream. The ferns intricately encased in brambles at the far right of the tall gorse barrier were the warriors’ den. She knew Dawnfang was very pleased to be staying in there again after so long in the nursery. Waterstar had made Spottedpaw an apprentice just a moon ago and his mother seems happy to get a break from him. Straight across from her den was the bracken and bramble wall of the nursery. She could imagine Gorsekit sleeping soundly against Bluemoon, unlike Specklefoot’s kits, who were six moons old now, and were fidgety and restless. She knew as well as Starkit, Dreamkit, and Silverkit that it was their time to be made apprentices. She’d have to think on that. She could also imagine Waveflight, a queen who had only just moved into the nursery, twitching and turning, trying to get into a comfortable position with kits in her belly. Waterstar knew how hard that could be. Beside the nursery, was the apprentice den, which were many short branches woven together with bramble tendrils. Spottedpaw was alone in there since Rosewhisker and Spikedfang were made warriors. Next to the warriors’ den were the roots of the giant oak where the elders had dug out a den. She could see a tortoise shell tail sticking out and fondly recognized it as Mottledface’s. The new elder had raised her and practically been her mother. Below her own den was the medicine cat’s den, which had actually been hollowed into the trunk of the tree. Strong herbal scents drifted out, and they made her nose tingle. Stripedfur was in there now, heeling from wrenching his shoulder on patrol. She knew he was in good hands; they had to have the best medicine cat there is. Just as Waterstar thought of her, the white, black and grey tortoise shell she-cat poked her face out. “Waterstar,” She asked softly, “Are you alright?” She tried not to imagine the large cats bearing down on her, tearing her apart. “Yes, I’m fine Cloudsky,” She responded, looking out over the camp, “it’s just been a restless night.” Cloudsky walked out over the branches until she met up with her, and she sat down beside her. “What is it?” She asked her blue eyes wide and curious. Waterstar sighed. She shouldn’t try to keep anything from Cloudsky. “I’ve just been having these night mares, over and over again, the same exact dream.” She flicked her gaze to Cloudsky, who was staring up at the starry realm above them. ‘’Can I ask what they’re about?” She said, and then seemed to dismiss it from the look in Waterstar’s eyes. “Well, when a cat dreams like this, it could mean star clan could be trying to tell them something.” Waterstar didn’t see how star clan would send a message in such a brutal way, and why would they want her to remember those cats in the first place? Ever since she was small, she’d been trying to forget. “I don’t know about that,” Waterstar admonished softly, “Would star clan really be the cause of something that frightens me so much?” Cloudsky purred in reassurance. “You’re the leader of Forestclan! No dream could frighten you.” She itemized encouragingly. With a respectful nod, the medicine cat padded back across the branches to tend to Stripedfur. As Waterstar watched her, she couldn’t help but have an aching feeling she was wrong. She had a feeling she should be very, very frightened.
Here's the whole prologue:
“This is it, Rose. Where are your kits?” Rose squinted, trying to stay strong and not break down in front of these cats. “I won’t tell you! You’ll have to kill me before you lay a single paw on them!” She spat, her hackles raised defensively. She wouldn’t let them have her kits; she knew what would happen if she did. The male cat who seemed to be souly in charge of the other two, smiled sickly. It made her stomach churn. “Well, I think that could be arranged,” He stated malevolently, turning to the two toms behind him, “What do you think Shadow? Leaf?” they snickered in reply, wriggling their shoulders in preparation for giving a butal beating. She snarled at them; sparrow always seemed to forget she was from the same place as him; she could fight just as well. They all attacked at once; shadow was raking his claws down her side and leaf dove under her belly and batted at her with his claws. She grabbed Shadow by the neck and rolled over, crushing him beneath her. He clawed at her muzzle, but before she could reattack, she noticed leaf slinking away into her den; her hiding place for her kits. She lunged forward to stop him, but sparrow grabbed her throat tightly in his jaws and threw her harshly to the ground, like a rag doll. She opened her eyes slowly, reeling with nasea, and coughed up what appeared to be a liter of blood. She then noticed her underside had been ripped open and her neck seemed to be leaking the warm, tangy liquid. She took deep rasping breaths and gazed up in despair, realizing they had found her kittens and were pushing them out of the safety of the den in the most inhumane way. She watched as the kits mewled in protest and confusion. “What’s going on?” her golden colored she-kit asked, fearfully gazing up at the three massive cats standing before her. Sparrow gazed down at them in disgust. “I honestly thought you could do better than this, Rose. You always were my favorite.” His insensitive comment drove her to a sudden rage. She lunged for sparrow with a furious yowl, but he turned and caught her, slamming her to the ground, holding her down by the neck using his sharpened claws. Calmly shifting his attention back to her three kits, He growled, “Look at your pathetic mother. She ran away from something she knew very well would happen at some point, yet she still fights on,” He gazed at her for a moment, a sort of nostalgia flickering in his fiery amber eyes before turning his hardened stare to the kits, “It has been an ancient ritual in our group for the kits of a family to fight to the death with their siblings to see which is worthy enough to survive. It’s your time. You two,” He said gazing at her she-kit and dark brown tom, “You go first.” They hesitated, not understanding at all what was going on or what the consequences would be. Sparrow growled, clenching harder on her neck, “fight now, or watch your mother die!” They started to whimper as they saw the dark blood welling at her throat. Two of her kits immediately started to play fight, trying hard not to hurt each other. “Claws unsheathed!” Leaf shrieked, cuffing them hard over the head, “You’re trying to kill each other!” the two moon old kits stopped and whined from being hit which, in turn, earned them another strike. “Go on! On your feet, fight!” Her kits gazed at each other for a moment, looking like trapped mice. Her tom glanced around at all of the cats around him, with no sense of right or wrong. Suddenly he lunged for his sister and fastened his undeveloped teeth around her neck. She shrieked in pain and fear as Rose struggled to get out from under her attacker's hold. “Don’t hurt her,” she barely managed to choke out, “value your sisters’ lives more than mine.” “Silence!” Sparrow roared, swiping her throat. Her tom let go of his sister, who appeared to be more miniscule and fragile then a snowflake. “Mama!” He screeched, his voice cracking. He was so young; they all were. Too small even to eat meat. Sparrow’s laws were unjust. Suddenly, her she-kit shifted her dying eyes to her brother, filled with knowledge and wisdom, as if she’d grown old while her brother almost killed her. “I know what we have to do,” She whispered in a squeaky voice. He stared into her unseen depths and seemed to some how understand what she was suggesting. Rose caught on too. “No!” She croaked, shifting her paws, “It doesn’t have to be like this!” but she knew that was a cold lie, and they knew it too. It was the only way for them to be together, and the only way to show them they wouldn’t give into their cowardly ways. After unspoken goodbyes, the golden kit clawed her brother’s throat open, spilling his blood like a flooding river. In return, as he died, he bent down and snapped his sister’s neck. He fell over her, staining both of their fluffy, innocent kit fur scarlet. Rose couldn’t stand it anymore, she didn’t care if they saw; she burst into tears. When she lifted her head, she noticed her last kit, a fluffy white female, staring wide eyed in horror at her dead littermates and sobbing mother. “Mama,” she cried, shaking, “What’s going on? Why aren’t Honey and Claw getting back up?” Her voice cracked in disdain and disbelief. Rose stared at her last kit in anguish, too little too understand death, and why it must happen. “Hang on Waterfall,” Rose croaked out, feebly attempting to sound strong so she wouldn’t frighten her, “I’m coming.” But sparrow pressed down harder on her, and she assumed he was ripping her throat out. “You’re not going anywhere,” He breathed menacingly in her ear, smelling of crow food and many other cats’ blood, “You’re siblings were weak,” He spat at her young daughter, “You might be able to survive, but I'm afraid there is no one else for you to fight. You'll just have to go up against us.” Rose wanted to cry out, to make him realize how ruthless and horrible he sounded, but she couldn’t manage a single sound now, let alone a word. She watched helplessly as the two toms attacked her daughter, ripping open her little fore head and tearing out her fur. It had only been moments later when Shadow and leaf stepped back to reveal a bloody clump of matted white fur that seemed completely unrecognizable now. Rose turned away, feeling any diminutive urge to live ebb away at that moment. Sparrow bent down, his amber gaze wild with rage and madness. “All of your offspring were feeble!” He murmured maliciously in her ear, “and so are you.” He finished her off in the most humane way possible for him, by ripping out what was left of her throat. Sparrow lifted his head to his companions, his mouth dripping with her blood. “Let’s get out of here, we’re done.” Shadow and leaf nodded obediently, and followed their leader away. Long after the sound of their paw steps had faded, waterfall did something sparrow never counted on. She sat up weakly, and puked up her last meal and a ton of blood. She could barely feel an inch of her body, and she felt so nauseas she thought she’d pass out, but she had lived. After her fuzzy vision cleared, she searched around anxiously, spotting her mother after a moment. Whimpering, she limped over feebly to her, collapsing on her once beautiful golden pelt that was now blood stained. “Mama,” She squeaked out, tasting blood form in her mouth, “Mama I’m ok, see?” She stared at her unseeing eyes with growing despair. She shook her roughly, “Mama, get up!” She wailed, tears flowing down her face, “get up.”
Waterstar awoke trembling, rasping deep heavy breaths. She looked around sharply but found no sign of danger or any cat in her dream for that matter. She stared down at her nest, noticing the deep claw marks she scourged into it and the bracken and fern that were now strewn across her den. After she could breathe again, and close her eyes without seeing horrifying images, she stood and walked hastily out. She padded onto the branch that hung above her den, and sat, trying to take deep breaths of the cool, crisp, night air. She didn’t know what was going on with her. She had the same nightmare every single night now, and some days she should have spent leading her clan, were instead spent sleeping to satisfy her tiredness. She didn’t feel tired now. She looked out over the camp, still shaken from her dream. The ferns intricately encased in brambles at the far right of the tall gorse barrier were the warriors’ den. She knew Dawnfang was very pleased to be staying in there again after so long in the nursery. Waterstar had made Spottedpaw an apprentice just a moon ago and his mother seems happy to get a break from him. Straight across from her den was the bracken and bramble wall of the nursery. She could imagine Gorsekit sleeping soundly against Bluemoon, unlike Specklefoot’s kits, who were six moons old now, and were fidgety and restless. She knew as well as Starkit, Dreamkit, and Silverkit that it was their time to be made apprentices. She’d have to think on that. She could also imagine Waveflight, a queen who had only just moved into the nursery, twitching and turning, trying to get into a comfortable position with kits in her belly. Waterstar knew how hard that could be. Beside the nursery, was the apprentice den, which were many short branches woven together with bramble tendrils. Spottedpaw was alone in there since Rosewhisker and Spikedfang were made warriors. Next to the warriors’ den were the roots of the giant oak where the elders had dug out a den. She could see a tortoise shell tail sticking out and fondly recognized it as Mottledface’s. The new elder had raised her and practically been her mother. Below her own den was the medicine cat’s den, which had actually been hollowed into the trunk of the tree. Strong herbal scents drifted out, and they made her nose tingle. Stripedfur was in there now, heeling from wrenching his shoulder on patrol. She knew he was in good hands; they had to have the best medicine cat there is. Just as Waterstar thought of her, the white, black and grey tortoise shell she-cat poked her face out. “Waterstar,” She asked softly, “Are you alright?” She tried not to imagine the large cats bearing down on her, tearing her apart. “Yes, I’m fine Cloudsky,” She responded, looking out over the camp, “it’s just been a restless night.” Cloudsky walked out over the branches until she met up with her, and she sat down beside her. “What is it?” She asked her blue eyes wide and curious. Waterstar sighed. She shouldn’t try to keep anything from Cloudsky. “I’ve just been having these night mares, over and over again, the same exact dream.” She flicked her gaze to Cloudsky, who was staring up at the starry realm above them. ‘’Can I ask what they’re about?” She said, and then seemed to dismiss it from the look in Waterstar’s eyes. “Well, when a cat dreams like this, it could mean star clan could be trying to tell them something.” Waterstar didn’t see how star clan would send a message in such a brutal way, and why would they want her to remember those cats in the first place? Ever since she was small, she’d been trying to forget. “I don’t know about that,” Waterstar admonished softly, “Would star clan really be the cause of something that frightens me so much?” Cloudsky purred in reassurance. “You’re the leader of Forestclan! No dream could frighten you.” She itemized encouragingly. With a respectful nod, the medicine cat padded back across the branches to tend to Stripedfur. As Waterstar watched her, she couldn’t help but have an aching feeling she was wrong. She had a feeling she should be very, very frightened.