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Post by silverheart on Oct 15, 2010 19:23:58 GMT -8
Name: Blazecloud- Clan: StormClan - Rank: warrior - Gender: she-cat Looks: A beautiful tan colored tabby she-cat. Has bluish green eyes. Has a small scar on front right leg from first battle as an apprentice. Also is dappled with small white spots. Personality: Normally happy. Not very sensitive, and when angered can be aggressive. Gets feisty when battle comes. Is long legged and swift. History: She has a very tragic history. Both of her sisters died from green cough when a bitter leaf-bare came. When she became an apprentice, her mother was killed in the battle where she got her scar on her front leg. Relatives or Mates: most of her family has died, and she's looking for a nice, strong tom to be her mate. ;D Notes:
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Post by Shadingsun on Oct 16, 2010 7:07:51 GMT -8
i cant accept it until you add another sentance to looks D: im suggesting separating the eye color from the pelt color?
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Post by silverheart on Oct 17, 2010 5:21:24 GMT -8
oh kk! btw, i'm going to do Silverheart's profie next!
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Post by Rainstar on Oct 17, 2010 13:01:32 GMT -8
You need to add another sentence to the history, hey i Didn't make these rules.
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Post by silverheart on Oct 17, 2010 15:43:12 GMT -8
ooooohhh.... didn't realise that I need another sentence.
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Post by Shadingsun on Oct 18, 2010 7:30:12 GMT -8
no....three sentances for history is fine for me ;p and ok
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Post by silverheart on Oct 18, 2010 17:21:56 GMT -8
YAYZ!!!! ;D
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Post by Shadingsun on Oct 20, 2010 12:17:09 GMT -8
so...i guess accepted xD i shall moves it!
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